- มีการแนะนำสิ่งที่ผู้ได้รับข้อมูลย

- มีการแนะนำสิ่งที่ผู้ได้รับข้อมูลย้อนกลับควรพัฒนาต่อ,โดยระบุอย่างชัดเจน เดาได้จากข้อความที่กล่าวว่า but I think the last point you made needs to be supported with better evidence และในข้อความที่กล่าวว่า “there were still some careless mistakes....”

Results (English) 1:

- With the introduction of what the feedback should be developed further, by stating clearly. Deduced from the text says but i think the last point you made needs to be supported with better evidence and a message that said "there were still some careless mistakes ....".

Results (English) 2:

-The introduction of what they receive back information should be developed further, by clearly identifying. Guess from the text that says the last point but I think needs to be made you better supported with evidence and, in the text that says "there were still some careless mistakes ...."

Results (English) 3:

- What is the recommended that the data has been received back should be developed, by clearly guessed from the message that said, but I think the last point you made needs to be supported with better evidence and in the text that says, "there were still some careless mistakes ... "