- มีการแนะนำสิ่งที่คนรับ feedback ค

- มีการแนะนำสิ่งที่คนรับ feedback ควรพัฒนาต่อ,โดยระบุอย่างชัดเจน ทราบได้จากข้อความที่กล่าวว่า but I think the last point you made needs to be supported with better evidence และในข้อความที่กล่าวว่า “there were still some careless mistakes....”

Results (English) 1:

- With the introduction of what the feedback should be developed further, by stating clearly. Know from the text says but i think the last point you made needs to be supported with better evidence and a message that said "there were still some careless mistakes ....".

Results (English) 2:

-Introduces what people receive feedback should be developed further, by clearly identifying. I know from the text, but I think that said the last point you made needs to be supported with better evidence, and in a message that said, "there were still some careless mistakes ...."

Results (English) 3:

- What is the recommended, should be developed to get feedback, you know, Clearly identifies the message that says I but think the last point you made needs to be supported with evidence and better in the text that says, "there were still some careless mistakes ... "